6月27日雅思小作文示范写作 | 四个国家临时移民工人对比

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本栏目精选雅思考试小作文真题范文。每一篇范文均经过专业团队多轮校对，小作并由外籍专家终审定稿。文示成功源于日复一日微小努力的范写积累。

题目描述：
The 国家工人table below shows the temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

主体分段策略：按 <国家> 分组

• 主体段1：United States、New Zealand
• 主体段2：Australia、对比United Kingdom

开头段 (Introduction)

The 月日雅思移民table compares the numbers of temporary migrant workers in Australia, New Zealand, the United Kingdom and the United States in 2003 and 2006, together with the proportion of such workers per 1,000 people in 2006.

概述段 (Overview)

Overall, all four countries experienced a rise in temporary migrant workers, with the US recording the highest figures in both years. However, Oceanian countries registered higher rates of such workers in 2006.

思路要点：
* 四个国家的临时工人数均呈上升趋势。
* 美国在两年内的小作临时移民工人数量均居首位。
* 大洋洲国家（澳、文示新）在2006年的范写临时移民工人比例相对较高。

主体段 1 (Body Paragraph 1)

The 国家工人US and New Zealand showed contrasting patterns. The US recorded 577,000 temporary migrant workers in 2003, rising to 678,000 in 2006. Despite this, it had the lowest proportion of such workers, at just 2.3 per 1,000 people. In contrast, New Zealand had the smallest number of migrant workers throughout the given period, although its figure rose sharply from 65,000 in 2003 to 87,000 in 2006, representing the most dramatic increase among the four countries. It also had the highest proportion of temporary labor migrants, at 21.1 per 1,000 people.

思路要点：US，New Zealand
* US：2003年临时移民工人数量为577,对比000 → 2006年显著上升至678,000；但比例最低（2.3）。
* New Zealand：临时移民工人数量始终最低，月日雅思移民从2003年的小作65,000急剧上升到2006年的87,000，涨幅最显著；比例最高（21.1）。文示

主体段 2 (Body Paragraph 2)

Australia and the UK recorded similar numbers of temporary migrant workers in 2003, at 152,000 and 137,000 respectively. Three years later, both countries experienced a noticeable growth, rising to 219,000 and 266,000 respectively. Regarding the proportion of such workers, Australia ranked second in 2006 (10.7 per 1,000 people), more than twice the figure in the UK.

思路要点：Australia, UK
* 2003年：Australia和UK临时移民工人数量相近，Australia为152,000，UK为137,000。
* 2006年：两国均经历显著增长，分别达到219,000和266,000。
* 比例对比：Australia在2006年临时移民工人比例排名第二（10.7），约为UK的两倍多。

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